losing love

Name : Moh. Jufri
NIM : 05320121
Subject : Creative Writing

Losing Love
1. The story idea
This film will talk about some one who falls in love in the first sight, they enjoyed with their love. .

2. The synopsis
some people believed that they can fall in love in the first sight, it is very-very difficult to forget it and it really happens in the real life but some people do not either. Irwi is one of them who is very sure that love comes in the first sight and it is unforgetable. Because it happened to Irwi himself.
He felt in love in the first sight to Irma when he was in the first year of school at senior high school. They were studying in the same institution i.e. SLTA 13 Pasongsonagan. They were, every day, going to school together. They loved very much each other because their parents allowed them falling in love each other. They will not be separated by anything, they are going to live together, Irwi has promised that he would marry Irma then has already made some lists what they will do after wedding party. For instance, they will have honey moon in Australia, they will stay in appartement, also they have already dicided that they would just have two children one boy and girl.
Promise is just promise for after finishing their study all of their parents aked to them whether Irma’s parents or Irwi’s parents that they must go on thier study to university. Irwi’s parents want him to study in Malang. In the other hand, Irma’s parents want her to study in Monash University (Australia) beacuse her parents have family there. So that, Irma’s parents are easy to control her for she come along with her family and Irma’s parents want her to be cleaver in speaking English. Finally, the all separeted, Irwi went to Malang and Irama went to Australia for studying.
In the first year of their farewell, they used to make call each other, sometimes, they used to send email, messages, and letter. Unfortunettly, in the following year, they seldom make call since all of them were busy with their study. When Irwi sent sms or email, Irma did not reply it, it is same as Irma. But Irwi tries to keep information with Irma, but not Irma. Evry times, Irwi send and call Irma but it was nilhil because Irma’s number is not active. Irwi has tried to complain with Irma’s parents that her number is not active. So that, Irma’s parents requeated to Irwi to seek information about her. But evrything that Irwi has done was useless.
Finally, Irwi permitted to his parents and candidate parents in law to go to Australia for seeking Irma. To know whether Irwi can find out Irma or not please watch this film.

3. Logline/Premis
Well, how is Irma’s life in Australia and how Irwi will find out her. And why Irma did not give information to her parents.

4. Treatmen
The first scene : it was the first time for Irwi and Irma entering to seniour high school. They have already prepared evrything before coming to that school so they had something new, like books, bags, pen, and uniform as well as freinds. Also they always kissed their parents’ hands. As like usual, every single new students in everry institution, the first time they come to the school, they are taken by their parents. Here, Irma was taken by her father, so does the Irwi. In front of gate of SLTA 13 Pasongsongan where Irwi and Irma will study, they met. Fortunatelly, Irwi’s and Irma’s father are friends. They have already recognized each other since they were in senior high school. Like Irwi and Irma now. They were chatting for while, Irma’s father introduced his daughter to Irwi’s father, either Irwi’s father. This story was setted in Irwi’s and Irma’s house and school. It is in Pasongsongan. And it occored in morning.
The second scene : when their parents were chatting seriously, Irma and Irwi were staring each other. So that they become friends. Irwi alwyas comes to Irma’s house so does Irma. Their parents agreed they are friends. Because they always congrigate they, finally, fall in love in each other untill they finished their study in seniour high school. However, after finishing their study, they must be part, Irwi must go to Malang for his degree, and Irma must go to Australia for her degree too. Because of this case, they never met and gave information.
The third scene : Irwi asked permittion to his parents and candidate parents in low to go to Australia fo looking for Irma. But it was too late because because Irma has already passed away before Irwi came.

5. Outline scene/scene plot
1. Irwi and Irma are going to study at seniour high school/ SLTA 13 Pasongsongan
2. their parents met in front of gate of SLTA 13 and they were friends
3. Irwi and Irma fall in love in each other
4. Irwi goes to Malang for studying in university
5. Irma goes to Australia for studying too
6. Irwi permitted to his parents in parents in law to go to Australia
7. he goes to Australia
8. Irma gets sick and passes away.